I’ve spent most of my weekend rewriting Fathom Five. Chapters five and six weren’t working out, with one focusing solely on Peter and the other focusing on Rosemary. A solution was to combine the two chapters together and interweave the scenes. The action now flows much better, but the alien world isn’t gelling, yet… Chapter four also got a rewrite, changing a dream sequence into a sequence in reality that accomplishes the same things. Always better to have it happen for real than in a dream, and I fixed some logic gaps on the way…
I’ll get this writing thing mastered yet!